Tattered Spirits
April 24, 2009

The hours seems endless
Darkness is the only thing here
Except the dim light from my last candle
whose consuming to exist
I thought I could write before it gone
But all I got here is an empty sheet,
And a full bottle of ink
I’m lost as my candle
I’m torn as my sad odes
He tore my heart in sunder
In love senseless game
No words could describe such a pain,
Such a shame
And oft in my solitude I sigh
And oft I remember his voice and cry
Till I heard a plea ..
I opened my window
I can see and I can hear
Other lost spirits
Walking, walking to and fro
Calling me to join them
And share them their despair
Beneath the moon’s pale beams
Among the trembling flowers,
And the forlorn trees
I opened my door
And walked towards them
I know what they are feeling
I know it all
I was one of them one day
And now I’m coming back home
I was in a dream
A perfect dream
A was in a song
A loftier Romantic one
I wrote the lyrics
And,
He sung
He captured a picture of love
Desperately, I was in
I was in and I was weary
Weary of the state I’m in
I watched him with Eternal Lids apart
As I know that he was a Miracle
And Miracles never last
And I couldn’t keep him , just ..
For a little longer
Now he is gone
And now I woke
I woke, Not from my slumber
I woke from my waking
Now I can let my Lids Rest ..
Hello ..
Hello ..
Hello tattered spirits
I’m back
We could Rest now
And enjoy our splendid tranquil Sleeping .
April 24, 2009 at 5:57 pm
For what good love can be…To fade in your mind and soul…To capture a wondering teardrop , yet shedding them all…To assure a trembling heart, yet beats in a roar…calm now fear not..Hear them whisper and have no doubt…Tattered spirits…Here I come.
April 25, 2009 at 10:26 am
i read it many times , your words are perfect and impressive as usual, but painful as well ,
I’m lost as my candle ,
No words could describe such a pain,
And share them their despair ,
Miracles never last
And I couldn’t keep him , just ..
For a little longer
Now he is gone
plz , do something for me , a happy-end poem
April 25, 2009 at 11:23 am
I promise u Tamer once I feel happiness I will share it here with u all ..
But let me tell u something this poem had a different end { A happy one } but ..
I dunn know ..
Fate wanted it that way .
April 25, 2009 at 11:27 am
Marwa , I’m so sorry that u will join this desperate circle ..
May 10, 2009 at 5:14 am
I felt this within… deeply reawakening emotions I have hid… to visit again, remember… the spirit may be tattered… yet it becomes numb after time…
Yes time… a friend or foe?
For now I choose my tattered spirit… again for a visit
Your poem is incredible… I truly did feel it… I know of what you speak… it has become a part of you… sadness is a thing of beauty… remember you are as the spirits of nature and life… and you get to feel it all
May 10, 2009 at 6:31 am
ohh my friend Enreal, hello ..
Realy miss u , U r the incredible one
hmm yes sadness became a part of me ,
Nothing bring joy to my life.
No love in it anymore just a picture of someone unknown .. and that kills me .