Standing on the edge of something too deep…very mysterious and amazing sentence,i don’t know why i feel i know that something, would you please allow me to ask you a question…is this somthing makes you feel scared?
U r great..i love everything u’v written.
ur heart over flows, i can see it in ur every perfect sentence u made to tell ur feeling.
keep going on..The lord is alwayz here..in ur precious heart and valuable soul
الدفتر و الفنجان و الهاتف
…my best line ..
فما عادت الآن رياح و لا رمال و لا قلاع
winds of his love moves sand of ur heart to build up castles of hope and yet as he gone all was gone…amazing
Many Thanks Mr. Sleiman for your encouragement to Me, You do really understand me very well ..
hmm ..
I can tell that I’m already taking My chances now;
I mean I have the Will but I did not jump off the cliff yet ..
September 29, 2008 at 1:29 pm
Thanks for the comment
you should check out the
poems earlier on in the
blog
[categorised as poem / poetry]
They’re somewhat better
than my later ones.
X
October 7, 2008 at 9:17 am
how do you come up with these poems and images.
ive used these as inpiration in my a-level coursework.
October 17, 2008 at 6:42 pm
You have a beautiful energy here… thank you for sharing your light
November 10, 2008 at 6:00 pm
Standing on the edge of something too deep…very mysterious and amazing sentence,i don’t know why i feel i know that something, would you please allow me to ask you a question…is this somthing makes you feel scared?
November 10, 2008 at 9:28 pm
It could be scared if u fell and nobody there to catch u,
It is the Edge between being in Heaven or burning in Hell .
December 9, 2008 at 8:33 pm
I love your blog Sleepingspirit, thanks for sharing yourself with us.
December 16, 2008 at 1:16 am
Dear Sleepingspirit,
thanks for your comment on my poem http://littlekhargosh.wordpress.com/2008/11/17/i-told-her-to-wait/
and thanks for feeling the words. i can soo tell you what happens next and what she will do cos ’she’ is me. she’s fine and has moved on.
January 1, 2009 at 11:15 pm
U r great..i love everything u’v written.
ur heart over flows, i can see it in ur every perfect sentence u made to tell ur feeling.
keep going on..The lord is alwayz here..in ur precious heart and valuable soul
March 27, 2009 at 4:15 pm
الدفتر و الفنجان و الهاتف
…my best line ..
فما عادت الآن رياح و لا رمال و لا قلاع
winds of his love moves sand of ur heart to build up castles of hope and yet as he gone all was gone…amazing
June 6, 2009 at 12:15 am
I am Standin’ on The Edge of something much too Deep
June 6, 2009 at 12:17 am
Just please give your mind space to Re-think again in everything …
June 6, 2009 at 12:20 am
SOmetimes,in our life we can meet someone we put strategical actions : ) to reach him and found ourself beside him all of the life ….
June 12, 2009 at 12:13 am
Again, thank you very much for your kind words.
I don’t know your situation but often something is too deep because we are on the outside.
Just step in.
It may be hell but I can tell you, heaven will be your reward.
June 12, 2009 at 11:17 am
Many Thanks Mr. Sleiman for your encouragement to Me, You do really understand me very well ..
hmm ..
I can tell that I’m already taking My chances now;
I mean I have the Will but I did not jump off the cliff yet ..
November 3, 2009 at 1:36 am
Smile on her lips and sadness in her eyes
November 4, 2009 at 4:44 pm
Realy….. you are a great writer…
November 8, 2009 at 4:42 pm
u r great ….